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I made this for my semester project at uni. I am still a first year, so constructive cricism is VERY welcome!
A bit sketchy, but nonetheless quite entertaining, nice music, too!
music is nice but need improvement in animation.....best of luck for us next project....
U want cricism??
Nice movie and it was-um-ok...
Firstly,the animations were a bit crappy (no offense),the outlines were a bit to thick (but don't put it too thin!).You could also put more effort in he background...
Secondly,how did the boy meet the star??Love?! -_-
If I'm being too strict,you don't really have to do this... 2/5
thats it, cute and warmhearting!
Good Music, keep working on your animation skills.
Even if you ar on your first years notice most of the best animators have from 15-20 years so keep on your job and you can make pretty amazings videos, for this kind of video of love whit no words ill advise you to watch the There She Is Videos here on newgrounds ;) good luck and keep working.
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