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Oct 10, 2009 | 8:40 PM EDT
  • Daily 4th Place October 11, 2009

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EDIT: Thank you for this award what you have bestowed upon me. I shall drink heartily from this mighty chalice and toast the cosmos under the guidance of both Zeus of Jebus. Cheers!

(I will respond to all reviews in a little while but I've got to go to B&Q to pick up some flooring (I'm redoing the hallway and living room) so I'll be back in a couple 'o hours.)


Violence, blood and pathos...

...we are about to learn a very important lesson.


Special thanks must go to the terrific voice actors for putting up with my nonsense over the last few months. They are, of course;

Courtney Leacock as: Narrator, Dr.Samuel Baxter, Parking Attendant, Captain Violence, "Billy".

Shard-Spider as: Dr.Dieter Von Slaphed/The Follicator.

and Ms. Rina-chan as: Susanna Giuseppe.

Thank you also to the fantastic audio artists who have unwittingly supplied the sound track to this glorious monstrosity.

I hope that you can find it in your hearts to forgive me.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

The most retarded story line ever,

yet i was laughing the whole way through

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sorbitol responds:

Glad it made you laugh, WarChimp!
Thanks for the review (and score)!

P.S: I wish my user-name was WarChimp!



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Really good!!!

Liked it very much.I want more

sorbitol responds:

HAHA! Thanks!

Who knows, it's quite possible that Captain Violence will return!



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


This wa sPreeeety Awesome!

sorbitol responds:

Thanks a lot!



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Pretty cool

It's like a real violate comic. Really weird tho.

sorbitol responds:

Thanks! I wanted it to feel similar to a silver-age comic book but with a bit more violence.
Glad you liked it!

Thanks for the great review PKforce323!



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


While this was very well animated and the a/v quality was also excellent, I feel that it suffered from poor writing. Som of the wording felt awkward and the humor was somewhat lacking in punch. If you are not a good writer, it would certainly not be amiss to find someone on a forum more capable, as an animator of your caliber would have no trouble finding someone willing to help.

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