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I was saving this for a collection of my shorts, but this turned out so well and I haven't submitted anything in a long time (now I know what it's like).
Problems already noted:
- Too short
- sound effects too loud
- Video clip is somewhat awkward
- White line at bottom
Sound Effect Credits:
- Corel Mega Gallery (Old CD from 1995)
--- Thanvannispen: scream
I really loved this animation. Sorry about the PM, I promised you to review on this flash on Friday but I was too sleepy that I kept on sleeping until it was night time. So here I go, this a great animation, I really enjoyed it. It was pretty better than your 2010 one. But how I will compare it, there both amazing! Oh yeah, remember your 2010 animation, that should get a sequel.
Also for the graphics, they were good. Pretty amazing and awesome. So now let's go to the bad and good:
- Amazing beginning.
- A little short but awesome!
- Great music in the "Main Theme."
- It had a funny ending.
- Terrific animation, Surn!
- You should make a great preloader instead of just putting your name and title of the animation. That should make you awesome. :)
- I want the animation to be longer because it would be funnier and funnier and funnier.
Ok, you only need two suggestions, the rest was awesome. And I wish the Average Score was larger, but don't worry....I will even make it bigger I hope! Just, if anybody else just reviewed here, it has been two months! Although this animation deserves a 8/10! I wish I could give you a better score but, it needs two things fixed so I just gave it an eight.
The concept of this flash was hilarious, and a genius idea. This is the second animation ever I laughed the hard the most! I mean every time I watch this I always laugh and fall down the hard ground. Am I funny or not? Lol, it doesn't really sound like it. But who cares about that bull shit, your animations are awesome! But lol, why did you want Carrotoid (Or whatever you call him.) dead? Lol, I thought he was an amazing hero. Lol now you killed him!
Since this animation is amazing, here are my overall scores:
Rating Score: 4/5
Excellent work man!
This animation was special and amazingly unique. I really REALLY REALLY enjoyed this amazing work. Concept was great, music was awesome, brilliant piece of work dude! Keep it up, Surn, keep up the fantastic work! So since this is the end of my review,
I gotta go now bye!
"You should make a great preloader instead of just putting your name and title of the animation. That should make you awesome. :)"
There is a green-bar preloader that disappears after loading. You probably didn't see it because the movie was so small (less than a megabite).
"I want the animation to be longer because it would be funnier and funnier and funnier."
I hope someday I can make a longer one.
"But lol, why did you want Carrotoid (Or whatever you call him.) dead?"
Not sure. I probably picked up the "kill your main character" thing from Kenneth Oppel's Silverwing trilogy (series of novels). Throughout the first two books the main character (Shade the bat) survives numerous perils, including having an bomb stitched into his belly. In the last book (which switches between himself and his son Griffin) Shade sacrifices himself for his son.
Still, while I have no intention of resurrecting this Carrotoid I hope to make another cartoon with other Carrotoids.
Thanks for the postive review on my work! I'll be sure to tell you if I make more another cartoon like this.
Though it wasn't music i absolutely loved the animation it looked really cool & unique then seeing the real life rabbit eat the carrotoid was funny and neat as well so overall it wasn't a great flash but it showed creativeness on animation and still a nice watch.
Heh, heh, If one doesn't have skill: use novelty.
How do you people keep finding me?
Well the ending was so lame that I laughed.
Pixelation in this was nice, but I have to ask. Was the carrot high?
No. Perhaps a tad exuberant- but not high.
A nice quick laugh, exactly 18 seconds lol
It doesn't make sense, but it is all for the sake of art!
Nom Nom Nom Nom
I kinda want to see this turned into a videogame.
The Rabbit could be the ending movie for a Game Over.
That's a good idea, but I don't see it happening any time soon.
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
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