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Oct 9, 2009 | 2:39 AM EDT

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Author Comments

It's my first movie............I made it in flash mx so here's the results.....XD
thanks for watching it. I realized my animation is still a lot of flaws so please critique and suggestions ...
and this continued to be animated for the sequel I will try to fill the animated character's voice...
but if many do not like this video I will not continue .....x3

I used song with title "jangan menyerah" of D'masiv
hahaha........sorry my English bad

review below is part of the misunderstanding..... I was wrong ........ I actually using flash ..... author has improved comment



Rated 0 / 5 stars


Grammar and spelling are terrible. Animation isn't even good... and the song is lame.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

for the first try?

not should try animate on sure ur animation can be more smooth than this

Kanatazeikyo responds:

gw salah tulis........maksudnya gw pake flash kok tapi gak begitu bisa begitu

I was wrong wrote author comment..... I really made it with flash


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Alright I guess

Thestory is not bad. As the person said below your english isn't the best and you should really have someone check it over before putting it out there.

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Rated 2 / 5 stars


Please ask someone to help you with the English subtitles, they were really bad - also difficult to see, while the song subtitles at the top were distracting. In fact, it might be better to try to just tell the story through images.

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Kanatazeikyo responds:

well .... I will improve my english .....


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Overall pretty good submission

The drawing is good...The animation has its bad/awkward moments,but not too bad... However the translations get pretty bad,lol...