Score: 10

"I'm Speechless"

by: killerjeff

date: November 22, 2009

I can't even begin to describe how magnificent this piece is, the artwork is flawless the sound is impeccable, I'm at loss of words.
You have unsurprisingly amazed me yet again David, I don't know where Newgrounds would be without you and your creative talent. I'm going to vote 5, and rate 10 on this beautiful flash that has bestowed upon me. I have been blessed, my eyes will cry crystals after seeing such a masterpiece.

Score: 1

"Frankly, David."

by: SCUD14

date: October 13, 2009

I only saw ONE THING that was changed from the shitty movie you put up a few months ago- and that was the bit after he finishes voting. Therefore you get a 1, instead of the zero it deserved last time.

The gradients were awful, and overused. The voice acting was pretty bad- please get a better microphone. The music was also too loud, which made the voices seem even worse.

Score: 2

"lame"

by: lolmetaknight

date: October 11, 2009

This movie is made with full of unfunny jokes, you're acting like the smart guy in a retarded world. I gave you 1 because i saw worse animation than this (you can say thanks to hiii111) and another 1 the TV part was less worse than the other parts. So 1+1=2, you get 2 (review score).

Score: 0

"Oh deary me David."

by: TheProfessors

date: October 9, 2009

I see very little changes and the quality of this 'animation' just doesn't compare to Newgrounds high standards.

Please contribute to the site positively David. Please refrain from spamming.

Score: 2

"Decent at best."

by: Kevin

date: October 9, 2009

The best way I can describe this movie is "Before its time".

The over use of gradients, the motion tweens. All stuff that was used back in the days of Flash MX.

I've seen your art David, you can do better.

Also, I think you need to work on your sound skills; The music in the background was a little too loud for my taste, as it drew my attention away from the movie, and if possible, get a better quality microphone.

The humor in this movie is decent though, I smirked at some points, mainly during the CSI episode. Other than that, the humor was stale and bland. It appears you should spend some more time on your script, try getting a friend or sibling to read your script, and provide input.

The only thing that kept me watching through all of this was of course, you. You are my favorite person ever. EVER.

As a final note, I must say that you should try working on something else, try some frame by frame, try looking at art tutorials. I know you have talent, you just need to unleash it. Also, I voted 0.