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EDIT: Chirst on a crossbun, thanks for the front page and the awards guys. Seriously, it's an honor :D.
So about three weeks ago I was rollerblading across a crosswalk when I was suddenly smashed by a turning car.
The first thing I did as I lay there in the middle of the highway was take out my phone and update my Facebook, proclaiming "just got hit by a car, lol."
And on the ride to the hospital I came up with this.
The animation was nice enough, but the drawings were somewhat sketchy and not fitting together. Someone had legs, others had lines. And the lines varied in thickness, which made the style a little bit sketchy. And the art wasn't beautiful at all, with no colors or shadows, and therefore with little depht and perspective in the picture.
The point of this is really awesome, though. It's really extreme and funny, but it coiuld have been much longer. With for example more examples of things that you must write on Facebook about. Or you could've made the last point go on for a longer time. But the things they wrote on Facebook were realistic (in the way of internet) and very hilarious.
So nice job and nice plot, but not very beautiful...
I was considering having him "change his profile picture" during the ending to him bleeding to death, but I worried it might start to drag.
Clever, funny, and scary... because I can actually picture people doing this instead of using the phone to call 911 -_-
Had to dock a couple points due to the subtitles being out of sync with the video, thus ruining the punchline.
It's lag, the subtitles are embedded in the camera. If you pause the movie/it lags too hard it'll go out of sync.
the animation was smooth and nice, and i like the tourettes guy audio clips. and i like how people spell things wrong on facebook and how you incorperated it into this flash. nice work, keep it up!
I found this amusing enough to post ON Facebook.
-it's just a flesh wound...
Not bad, a little more color does it for me.
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
Meeting new people on the first day can be a real gamble.
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