Eulogy For: D.O.D Ch1: Reprecussions
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This submission was BLAMMED by our users.
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
10/05/09 – 12/06/09
Death of The Dictator
Not my first flash but my first post. It may look amaturish to you veterans but i'm posting it anyway. It's not perfect and I don't know all the tricks. Hopefully you get some kind of enjoyment out of it. The story goes as follows:
In an epic battle, Ryu was forced to draw upon his Dark Hadou to defeat Bison. With and earth shattering Shin Shoryuken, Bison's body was split in two and Ryu was left unconscious. His psycho essence spread across the globe affecting different people in different ways. The combination of the Dark Hadou and Psycho Power opened a dimensional rift which added further chaos. Interpol and a group of heroes investigate the chaos and find out who is trying to resurrect the Shadowloo as earth's most formidable faction The Future Force.
P.S. Sorry but you may wanna read kinda fast. Enjoy
no lazer charges here boss.
in a big fight movies, while they may demonstrate a bit of technical skill... ARE ULTIMATELY SO TIRESOME AND ABSOLUTELY LACK EVEN A SHRED OF ORIGINALITY AND SO MUST ALL BE BLAMMED!!
And here is how you spell dimensional: "dimensional"
This actually isn't bad for a beginner flash. Your choreography is interesting, but you need to work on your VCAM usage. For example, never alter the relative dimensions of the VCAM- it will distort the visuals. It should maintain the same height/width aspect ratio at all times.
You should also look into menu development. While story is good in general, it becomes a chore on subsequent plays if the viewer already knows the plot-line. There should be some means of skipping it when you've already read it.
You've got potential. Don't let a few zero-bombing detractors discourage you. You will get better with time.
R1665
Okay, first off... longest flash I've watched yet. lol but you've given this some real effort. It has story, which I haven't personally haven't seen on here before with a mixed array of characters. It sort of reminds me of the whole crisis thing in D.C with the whole dimensional backstory. The fact that you used sprites doesn't bother me at all, you're doing something you like to do and in the process you're learning. It's entertaining, and I like it! Eight stars, I hope you continue the story.
but please, use proper english, its not "dis" or "da" its "this" and "the"