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Oct 3, 2009 | 6:46 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place October 4, 2009

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Hey Guys... Well It's been a while, I know... But here is my newest flash... I really hope you guys enjoy it... and if you did, I would really appreciate your comments...

Thanks Always,
Ashley

Reviews


Sparx-1Sparx-1

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 4, 2009

Beat me to it!

I was planning on making a video to this song, but it looks like you made one first.

I really liked it, but I would advise making more angles or animations for the girl aside from just facing the screen. I thought the style was very creative as well, gave it sort of a morbid, Tim Burton-like feel. Also, I never imagined the "Army of Doom" as robots, so it was cool to see someone else's interpretation.

Overall, it was pretty good!


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cheshirecat1582 responds:

I totally encourage you to animate your own version of this song!!!!!! Seriously dont let my animation stop you from making your own... Actually i would REALLY enjoy your take of it... if you do make it... be sure to let me know when you post it..


animeruleranimeruler

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 4, 2009

oh my god

THis was beautiful.. she lost her ffamily and has a fear of death..
the music was a nice choice for it and i loved the graphics
LOVED IT


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kougalivekougalive

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars October 4, 2009

nice.

Well, it´s very good, in all aspects, specially the song. And the crow-stiled "replay" button was an great idea. And the guy who gave you an zero is an envyous stupid, never mind =)


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cheshirecat1582 responds:

Haha, thank you! Yeah I love and hate when people give me zeros.. i hate it when they dont say anything about why it was a 0 other then it was crap... and i love it when people give me a 0 and explain why they thought it was crap because then i can actually take something away from that review... other then that one particular person thought it sucked... and something that i can improve on... So thank you for your encouraging words! and thanks for the 9!


xXWolfieXxxXWolfieXx

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 4, 2009

I enjoyed the concept

It told a story, that's what I liked about it, it had a natural progression and you could follow it nice and easy.

As for the animation, it was far too blocky, then again, I don't know how long you have been animating. For your next project, might I suggest maybe making it shorter, and trying to either animate at a slightly higher fps, or to just try and add some definition to the artwork.

But, you can tell you put a good amount of effort into this, and that I can't mark you down horribly for, and ultimately, this is about you, not what the masses of internet idiots like myself think.


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cheshirecat1582 responds:

Yeah... thats one of my biggest problems is depth... i can draw out animations just fine but then when it comes to animating what i just drew... i get too excited and i fail to take the time to actually animate it... i think i will make my next flash shorter and pay WAY more attention to details.. You make allot of good points and your review is VERY helpful!!! I really hope my next flash makes it into a collection though... I have one other flash in a collection but i dont think its very good... maybe if i define my work it would help... That will be my next goal!! lol thanks for your review... it really did help allot!


qwertypower9qwertypower9

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 4, 2009

That was great!

Wow... I think this did deserver a daily. Great song, great scenario, great everything. 5/5, 10/10.