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Hey Guys... Well It's been a while, I know... But here is my newest flash... I really hope you guys enjoy it... and if you did, I would really appreciate your comments...
Beat me to it!
I was planning on making a video to this song, but it looks like you made one first.
I really liked it, but I would advise making more angles or animations for the girl aside from just facing the screen. I thought the style was very creative as well, gave it sort of a morbid, Tim Burton-like feel. Also, I never imagined the "Army of Doom" as robots, so it was cool to see someone else's interpretation.
Overall, it was pretty good!
I totally encourage you to animate your own version of this song!!!!!! Seriously dont let my animation stop you from making your own... Actually i would REALLY enjoy your take of it... if you do make it... be sure to let me know when you post it..
oh my god
THis was beautiful.. she lost her ffamily and has a fear of death..
the music was a nice choice for it and i loved the graphics
Well, it´s very good, in all aspects, specially the song. And the crow-stiled "replay" button was an great idea. And the guy who gave you an zero is an envyous stupid, never mind =)
Haha, thank you! Yeah I love and hate when people give me zeros.. i hate it when they dont say anything about why it was a 0 other then it was crap... and i love it when people give me a 0 and explain why they thought it was crap because then i can actually take something away from that review... other then that one particular person thought it sucked... and something that i can improve on... So thank you for your encouraging words! and thanks for the 9!
I enjoyed the concept
It told a story, that's what I liked about it, it had a natural progression and you could follow it nice and easy.
As for the animation, it was far too blocky, then again, I don't know how long you have been animating. For your next project, might I suggest maybe making it shorter, and trying to either animate at a slightly higher fps, or to just try and add some definition to the artwork.
But, you can tell you put a good amount of effort into this, and that I can't mark you down horribly for, and ultimately, this is about you, not what the masses of internet idiots like myself think.
Yeah... thats one of my biggest problems is depth... i can draw out animations just fine but then when it comes to animating what i just drew... i get too excited and i fail to take the time to actually animate it... i think i will make my next flash shorter and pay WAY more attention to details.. You make allot of good points and your review is VERY helpful!!! I really hope my next flash makes it into a collection though... I have one other flash in a collection but i dont think its very good... maybe if i define my work it would help... That will be my next goal!! lol thanks for your review... it really did help allot!
That was great!
Wow... I think this did deserver a daily. Great song, great scenario, great everything. 5/5, 10/10.
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