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Submitted: 10/03/2009 | 06:46PM EST

File Info: Movie | 2.8 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Genre: Music Video

Current Score: 3.91 / 5.00

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Author Comments

Hey Guys... Well It's been a while, I know... But here is my newest flash... I really hope you guys enjoy it... and if you did, I would really appreciate your comments...

Thanks Always,
Ashley

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Average Score: 8.6 / 10

Score: 8
jetfusion

"The song is good but the animation doesn't fit"

date: October 27, 2009

I agree that you took the made into them to literally and the animation was great. I just think you never really sat down and planned it. For instance would it not have made ALOT more sense if it was like a nazi type group and she see them killing people and they force her to join their ranks and try to train her as a special agent of some kind.......

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Score: 7
OnyxMyr

"Too Literal"

date: October 20, 2009

In my opinion you took the line about turning her into them too literally, I think by turning her into one of them, it means that she was made into a ruthless killer like the invaders. Other than that and the fairly average animation it was a good interpretation.

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Score: 7
PhantomsWraith

"im agreein with auzie"

date: October 10, 2009

it just doesant seem to match. ur tellin me the aleins are mishapen space mines, unicylyes, and a grey pacman leader in a buncha blimps did all that?! and it did seem a bit distroted...also in the beginning it said "made my ashly" do u mean made by ashly? and how come the girl only became a cyborg...why dident the aleins just waste her like the others...their robots so they haev no mentaliity so u actully screwed urself in that department. now if they were more organic with maybe cyber liek armor idk then theyd atleast have a thought to use the girl..and the girl just wastes 3 of teh spice miune ppl with a red flash....wat a red emp? it woulda wasted the entire area around here...look animation was good and it sumwat fit...but mostly it became a bit mishapen this is my opinion u can tell me to fuck off and get all pissy but thats not gonna change it....4/5/ 7/10
~phantom out

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Score: 6
auzie

"Ummm, im the bad one"

by: auzie
date: October 5, 2009

I only gave you a 6/10 for this reason;

Hania's music is traditional with a hyper special tone and rhythm, i believe the Animation did not live up the the song, and your skills as a film maker are not up for debate, You have talent, Most ive not seen in along time, Must have taken you ages to do this and hours of time to fine tune the seamless animation

Where you fell;
-The music during upload or by your fault was distorted drastically, i think this takes away from the final product,
- The Idea of Aliens, ... That lost it for me, your depiction of the events must be different from my own but i saw a murder and her becoming a murderer like 'KILL BILL' instead of he becoming what they are 'killers' she is something else,

Where you gained;
-The overall generation of the story to the song was highly enticing, i could watch it over and over without getting bothered
- Using such a rich piece of music and such a good singer tone in your choice of animation was giving you bonuses.

Overall judgment;
You dont have to care what i like you are who you are, we are diffrent and im aware my opinion does not rule your life, i offer judgment and opinions to my own feelings,
This is why i love the project and i love the song, if it was different storyline i dont know.

Love it outright
5/5
6/10
- Auzie

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Score: 10
nebsta

"interesting"

by: nebsta
date: October 4, 2009

i like this very much, and iv visited your website. all of these AMV's are very eery, but yet so good. Keep up the awesome animating :)

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