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Vigilance 11

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Oct 2, 2009 | 9:33 AM EDT

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NOTE: if u have a white screen im working on the problem, for some reason the upload to NG isnt really working with my flash. if you do how ever see the flash but the preloader isnt showing its loading. just give it a minute, its loading but i am fixing that too. this would have been fixed before submission but i never saw anything wrong til after the upload sadly.

i advise watching parts 1-10 wich are Vigilance 1-5. Shell 6-7, Delta 8, Vigilance 9-10.

Vigilance 11 - more questions then answers, more missing history, missing explanations. how much can be filled......with little information we have, questions rise as answers are no where to be found, yet.



Rated 5 / 5 stars


Now I kind of know wth is going on!! Yays!! Of course, off-handedly figured just where some people I'm not gonna mention came from (although one or two are still missing... or R they?), and kind of freak out about how 1-10 and the first part of this one take place somewhere called Siren, but... YAYS.

also, the blooper reel was epic.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Like it.

I see some of the other comments, and while I agree that there's always room for improvement, that'll come with time. The important thing is the story, and it sounds like you've got this one very well-plotted out. I can see a lot of potential for this, maybe even epic potential. I look forward to seeing where you take this. :-)

cris17 responds:

thanks man much appreciated :)


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

ok soo

see i really did like this. first, i like the whole mood, and tha ambience created. it could be you caught me at a good time. anyways, what really needs work is the animation itself. to many still shots, and to many rasterized pictures. not enough movement at all. but at least the vo was decent, and given i havent seen any other episode of this, the story seems well thought out. over all a 7 because it was intertaining, but did lack alot on the part of effort


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

not bad

i like the story its ok but the art could be beter take some art lessons or study some drawings and might whant to use a filter on your mic to sum up get filter and improve your skill in drawing its not too hard just some effort and just do some more screen shots and make more movement in your vids its not so hard and it will mean the diference between a good vid and a bad one. peace


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


you have a decent series here but i must say, there is such a thing as too much story build up. you should take it back a couple of notches and get with the action.

cris17 responds:

ill do it as i see fit so no thanks