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Sep 30, 2009 | 6:55 PM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place October 1, 2009

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I noticed there werent a lot of Alice in Wonderland videos on newgrounds and decided to make my own version.
I made this for my animation class and I know the drawings arent very good I had to rush because I had a due date and finished just yesterday.
A little over a month it took me.

The music doesnt always match because I thought I fixed it and when I made it into a swf the music changed a little bit, and WHATEVER you do, DO NOT pause it or else the music will keep going lawl.

I fail at codes but I love animating, I just learned how to use the filters btw ^_^ I kind of abused them. XD

So I made another attempt to create a play button, no luck at all.. I think I am mentally retarded, I look in the book to see how and I did it I even got to clicking it... but I still had some issues.Im still working on it not sure what I'm doing wrong though. : /

BTW I got the soundeffects from findsounds, a website that saved my ass a little : D

Again, please dont bash me on not making a button I really want to learn but for some reason Im doing something wrong, not sure what it is but Ill try to work on that during class.. @_@ I feel retarded.
I know from my last submission i needed a play button

I guess I should let you know why the art work is scratchy, I used a mouse to draw it all, if I had a tablet I would have been able to make it a little bit more well, I guess less tweening I should say would be involved.

The very first song is Stabbing Westward - Darkest Days



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Considering all details...

It was dark and nice to watch but you really need to work on...
1. a play button
2. better drawing animation. (some people can draw well with a mouse!)

But kudos for...
1. story line
2. some sound effects
3. overall mood

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Syringes responds:

Yea drawing with a mouse is easy but animating is really haaard D:

But thanks! I have a tablet now so no more excuses for me haha.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very Nice.

Neat and dark, but you should have called it "Alice's Hell". And the zombie things that appear in the Red Castle look A LOT like a Zelda zombie. A bit sketchy at times, but very neat.

Syringes responds:

Haha the title is my personal choice though. And I know you may think that.. it was more of a zombie like dead guy but I guess it came off as that for some reason DD:

Thanks : D


Rated 4 / 5 stars


very nice. it had a nice certain dark feeling to it and i never saw the ending coming. the close ups of faces were well drawn but the rest wasnt. just work on the backround drawings.

Syringes responds:

I agree, when I remake it Ill pay more attention to detail rather than how fast I can get it done @_@ Its just that, when i have an idea for the next scene, I wanna hurry up and get to it before I forget it, thats why i should have made a storyboard first xD


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Fantastic, but needs to be more detailed.

It needs to look more detailed (the only reason why I am giving this a 9 instead of a 10). Alice oft looks like a boy in that video. Besides the blur, I really like this video. The music has the perfect feel of a creepy Wonderland. What is the first song called?

Among things that I do not like . . . the Hatter looks like a leprecon because of his green attire. You really should have picked his clothes to be something else. Black and white checkers perhaps? I like his face even though it reminds me of Shaggy from Scooby Doo. A tip for you though is to not have the Hatter drinking blood. It is very unoriginal. How about tar instead? It is not something that is usually thought of and to be honest, I find it to be much more creepy. The thought of a sticky, black toxic polluting my insides sends chills down my spine.

The Queen of Hearts looks awesome. Her smile looks like a moustache though, or at least at one part, and the "shing" sound of the nail reflecting should be cut out. Why? I . . . am not sure to be honest. I do not like it. Although the Queen is dangerous, it makes her appear more threatening than she is. Let me put this differently. It makes me feel as if the Queen is about to kill Alice with her nails. It seems corney and loses all disturbia. I wish Alice didn't awake right when the Queen had her! I get so into this short film and wish to see more, but it has to end somewhere, eh? At least the Cheshire cat was lurking though to show that Wonderland is real. . . .

I really wish you would remake this flash, to redraw everything with your best ability and with the most detail possible. Please? I love it, to be honest. I even wish it was longer, or if you made more about Wonderland. But I mustn't be obnixious, and I can't force you to waste your time on something a fan wants. But . . . may you please remake this? I do not know if you will read this comment but if you choose to reply, message me. Thank you for considering my request!

Syringes responds:

Thanks dude! Im glad you pointed out some things I should fix(I like the tar idea), whats funny was I was planning on actually remaking it since I no longer have to use a mouse and all ^^ Its something I wanted to do for a while seeing how more than enough people have asked me to! : D Thanks for the critique and you'll definitely be seeing a new version of this! ^__^ Might take me a bit I am working on 2 things currently but I doubt Ill finish those to fast I can fit in a 3rd. xD

Again, thanks for pointing some things out that I should fix, I will work on it. ^^


Rated 4 / 5 stars


I didn't know you drew it all by mouse, until I read your description.
good job! just imagine what you can do if u had a wacom tablet!

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Syringes responds:

xD Yea, I didnt know if I should have mentioned it or not but I had to explain the bad drawings somehow. x[