Score: 10

"it was really funny"

by: kirbykidaj

date: December 11, 2009

i like the gameboy insert that was funny. i liked your editor's voice for kirby outtake.

Score: 9

"Great improvement!"

by: Raptros

date: October 10, 2009

Your getting better and better each episode :]. This one was nicely done and the jokes were funny as well, especially links part. i also enjoyed Kirby (obviously) since he was suppose to do be doing an important task but instead goes off plays pokemon..lol, really great, Gustavos :D

Score: 7

"not bad, really"

by: Dr4g00n

date: September 30, 2009

animation is not bad, here are a few tips, i dont know if they will be useful for you, but i tried:
- if youre the only one who do voiceacting, try to change your voice more radically between the characters
- use different (or no) music in the beginning and ending, the music you used in that one is .. kind off.. dont know, not so good fitting
- you definitely overused colors in the main menu

Score: 7

"A series worth watching..."

by: Coop83

date: September 30, 2009

Looks like I might have to go back and watch the previous episodes of this piece, in order to get a grasp of what's going on.

Still, this is a nicely laid out piece, where the drawing of the characters is good, as you've taken sprites and made them into drawings of your own that you can animate properly.

I think that the plot does seem a little ambiguous in places, but I think that most people with common sense can work out that Link seems to be one of the people required to make up the six with Kirby, so it is panning out in the right direction.

A good looking series, I look forward to seeing more from you :)

[Review Request Club]

Score: 7

"pretty good"

by: Gio-Dude

date: September 30, 2009

But u need to adjust sound. Even if ur using a cheap mic, u can do this:

Turn up the mic recording volume up high and adjust it so that when u speak at ur loudest, it almost hits the red. Whenever u record and the meter goes into the red, u are losing sound quality, because the recorder is clipping it off at that point.
Now that u have ur sound adjusted, record as close, loud, and as clear into the mic as possible. Then when ur ready to mix it, u can lower the volume and reduce that buzzing, background noise. (look up sound-to-noise ratio)
U should also record some audio with u talking n apply that as a room tone. This will help u have a consistent audio track, without the jarring silence when u cut the sound clip.

I hope this helps n i look forward to seeing ur future work.