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edit**((( eh that entire spam befor just let me look stupid... so lets remove it.
enjoy it flash or dont enjoy it, that is the question)))
"Edit: now hase the flash scenes select"
finaly episode 4 is done:
*bocodamondo want to earn money so he cook 'fred" and the rest is the beginn of a new fricking adventure of bocodamondo.
-thanks to jaxxy egoraptor tomamoto & eddsworld to helping me on the voices in my submission.
you can see the flash is 9MB thats why i can't make subtittles
but im sure next flash i can do it :D
about the art, (deleted)
about the audio: bad quality WAS* bad
if you like my works here more:
so that it...
with big love -bocodamondo
This is quite literally...
I actually had to log in, to tell you how awful this movie was.
First of all, let me start on the flow of the whole story.
Audio: Very Strewn out, not connecting at all, no background music
to connect Scene A to Scene B. Voice acting was good on the parts of
Egoraptor, Eddsworld, but whoever did the voice of Boco...
Well, let's just say, I recommend you take some voice acting classes,
that was pretty poor.
I'm not done on the review for audio though, random placements of sound
effects, not exactly a filler, or a good one, thatis.
Some effects had been thrown in, that had no effect to inspire, nay, intrigue
Music, when you had it, was a good choice, but all in all, it lacked nessecary vocal mixing, transition music [as in things that keep the flow going and smoothly connect Scene A to Scene B]
Art: This was a severe letdown, mostly, when people do things in Mspaint,
it's a natural red flag for a person to go "Shit, closing window now!". Some
things in Mspaint, absolutely gorgeous, I've seen many sprites made in it,
it's a good tool if you can actually use it like a person who has studied it.
The Backgrounds, uninspiring, lack of details, not enough, or little effort
thrown into them, i suggest googling "How to create Parallaxes for use
in flash." and study it immensely. The objects used, just looked like boxes, rectangular boxes, and shades, if there were any, were unrealistic, and over
I suggest you take a look at some of egoraptor's works, he does the whole
random thing right, if you want to go that route, he's "The Man" to look at
as a positive role-model for such.
As for you saying you didn't do it on a tablet, and it's in mouse.
That's not a great excuse..
Many Flash artists, and professionals, nay, Mediocre artists in any art
industry use Mouse about %50+ Percent of the time and do one hell of
a lot better than the attempts you have tried.
Story: It's the same thing as a cartoon i've watched on The Grim Adventures Billy and Mandy, only with a "WTF BOOM!!!" here, and a "Moocher" there.
I honestly suggest you watch some things by the various newgrounds
artist, and study how you put together a good flash storyline.
I'm merely telling you how to fix some things. Whether or not you listen to
my advice, well, that's up to you.
i know i stop to responds comments but ...
i never heart from a serie called Billy and Mandy... WTF?
This Is Goo that ou can Animate but t just sucked. How Did you even get Egoraptor, Eddsworld, and the rest to even do this!!??!?
Mhh... sorry but realy crappy...
It's so a shame that you waste such famous people to do such crappy-slowy-sluggy stuff... >:(
Thus, the begin of "musical" is ok, but the whole is sOOOOOOO slow man! How can't you see that?!?
I felt asleep and got bored at the same time!
And sorry but I didn't laughed at any time and the sounds of your crap just freaked me out while I was writing this review!
I'm sorry guy but it's not because you have good contacts that the sh..stuff your doing is good. :(
But at least, you may try to use the contacts you seem to have to learn how do a REAL good stuff, with good timing and jokes, and maybe people wont give you stars for the effort.
(ps : I admit that for a 1 week job, you can't do much better. So take your time next time! :) It takes time even to awesome people to make good stuff! An example? Look-at Blizzard! :) )
Cheers ! (anyway ;p )
whatever you joke
Bad effects Bad animation Bad sound. and cooking is spelt cooking
This flash is horrible. The backgrounds are horrid, the art is horrid, the only thing that isn't horrid is the voices you got. I understand that you are not a wonderful or experienced artist, but you should really, REALLY practice and put more effort than this. This was such a disappointment, and I believe the only reason there are so many views is because you got Egoraptor, Eddsworld, Jaxxy, and Tomamoto to voice. I am suprised they actually voiced for such an abomination. You can tell how little effort there is when there is green in the eyes once in a while when there is a green background. Good Day, and 0 for you.
A short film about a park bench
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