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edit**((( eh that entire spam befor just let me look stupid... so lets remove it.
enjoy it flash or dont enjoy it, that is the question)))
"Edit: now hase the flash scenes select"
finaly episode 4 is done:
*bocodamondo want to earn money so he cook 'fred" and the rest is the beginn of a new fricking adventure of bocodamondo.
-thanks to jaxxy egoraptor tomamoto & eddsworld to helping me on the voices in my submission.
you can see the flash is 9MB thats why i can't make subtittles
but im sure next flash i can do it :D
about the art, (deleted)
about the audio: bad quality WAS* bad
if you like my works here more:
so that it...
with big love -bocodamondo
a few tips
now, im no flash expert, and i (no offence) suck WAY more than you
we all gotta start somewhere, and this is an exeption keep trying, and if you keep at it, you can be as popular as eddsworld.
just work on your english, and smoothen up your animating, and youll be off your knees and on your feet.
One last thing.
i know its kinda hard coming up with jokes, but try to use things like WTF BOOM and shoop da woop less often.
maybe youll come up with something thatll be the next awesome face.
hope this helps
1: i dont take it as offence :P
2: no I CANT be more popular then eddsworld but thanks for saying it xD
3: yep! my english is getting better and better :D
4: the animation thing is allready fixed... (DRAW TABLET 5000!!!)
5: wtf boom and shoop da woop are stupid and useless on a long animation
maybe good for the end of a suprice short flash ..but not for an 10 minute long video...
6: yes i will do my best
thanks for the review & the 9 :D
really ego, really>?
thats not an comment...but the ansewr is.. yes LOL
I give you 3 because of the voices but.... I don't even want to know how the fuck you got those guys to work along you in this ugly piece of horse shit...
Have you ever considered taking an English class? You are obviously unable to speak it or write it properly.
time my friend time ^^
ok i agree about that english wasen't good...but i think now im better :D
and yes im taking english classes...but there useless for me now
i learned the entire english from play station 2 games like :GTA SA and RE4
but in that year i got more from the worlds best firend the INTERNET
so yeah ^^... ps THERE helped me thanks to the awesome jaxxy :D
Well the jokes were humorous.
I think the main flaw behind this was that the jokes were too far apart. It seemed like there were a lot of parts where nothing at all seemed to happen. The jokes themselves actually weren't too bad and I actually kinda liked the animation. I think it's important that you bring your own style to your work and I'd say you did that fairly well cause I've never seen a video quite like this before. So to sum up this review: keep it short, keep it simple, and keep the jokes a rollin'.
yeah true...my mind is not "100% original"
but im trying my best...
thanks for the review & 6 ^^
Bare with me...
I usually mark animations down based on how many bad points they had. So here they are (and I marking this to the same standard as every other animation so that you may improve if you decide to make future animations):
1) The intro was too long and boring and thus made me lose some interest straight away.
2) The animation itself wasn't good, it's something you can improve on though, some character drawings show potential.
3) The voice acting wasn't good and I could barely hear them, could be solved by tweaking, buying a new mic and experimenting with new voices.
4) Crackling sounds annoyed me (Again I guess that comes down to mic quality)
5) I didn't laugh. I guess you could improve by using fedback from animations like this to decide what the audience want.
6) The storyine was not gripping for me, a short animation can go on without making sense and keep people gripped, but when an animation is this long it needs a good story base.
7) The animation dragged on for too long (as said above unless you have solid content to put in the animation keep it short).
That put aside I'm sure you had fun making it! I hope in the future you can produce some good comical animations. I think short, silly, random animations would be your style!
A short film about a park bench
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