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edit**((( eh that entire spam befor just let me look stupid... so lets remove it.
enjoy it flash or dont enjoy it, that is the question)))
"Edit: now hase the flash scenes select"
finaly episode 4 is done:
*bocodamondo want to earn money so he cook 'fred" and the rest is the beginn of a new fricking adventure of bocodamondo.
-thanks to jaxxy egoraptor tomamoto & eddsworld to helping me on the voices in my submission.
you can see the flash is 9MB thats why i can't make subtittles
but im sure next flash i can do it :D
about the art, (deleted)
about the audio: bad quality WAS* bad
if you like my works here more:
so that it...
with big love -bocodamondo
Interesting flash you have here. Lots of TV/game/internet references and an amusing plot. Keep trying and you should become pretty good :D.
Probably know this, but work on: voice volume, animation, etc...
IMMA FIREIN MAH LAZOR BLARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR RGH!!!
You should've put an ad in it.
You would have made a good 10 bucks.
I fancy the idea
Animation was pretty poor though, but the writing and humour was pretty good
I would say, this was pretty bad... BUT! You will get a lot better, your just 17, if you keep doing this you wi get a lot better
Everyone must start somewhere ;D
Because everything besides the animation is pretty good, Keep making animations! ^^
(Just one question, are you Russian? because of the accent ;) just wondering)
Learning your english from ps2 games, how convenient
i gotta say, that's how i learned to talk English well, lol xD
oh yea, how did you meet up with Egoraptor and the others? :D
im giving you a ten mainly because a lot of people are being assholes you just need practice! I wanna start my own series too someday but i still need a lot of practice with flash ive been practicing alot lately for 2 years straght! im hoping to get started on a flash by 2011 or atleast by the end of 2010 (even though its almost 2011) anyways im sure if you keep ignoring these people and keep doing what you do im sure you'll make an awesome series someday. ;)
well thanks talltothesmall xD
a few tips
now, im no flash expert, and i (no offence) suck WAY more than you
we all gotta start somewhere, and this is an exeption keep trying, and if you keep at it, you can be as popular as eddsworld.
just work on your english, and smoothen up your animating, and youll be off your knees and on your feet.
One last thing.
i know its kinda hard coming up with jokes, but try to use things like WTF BOOM and shoop da woop less often.
maybe youll come up with something thatll be the next awesome face.
hope this helps
1: i dont take it as offence :P
2: no I CANT be more popular then eddsworld but thanks for saying it xD
3: yep! my english is getting better and better :D
4: the animation thing is allready fixed... (DRAW TABLET 5000!!!)
5: wtf boom and shoop da woop are stupid and useless on a long animation
maybe good for the end of a suprice short flash ..but not for an 10 minute long video...
6: yes i will do my best
thanks for the review & the 9 :D
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