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edit**((( eh that entire spam befor just let me look stupid... so lets remove it.
enjoy it flash or dont enjoy it, that is the question)))
"Edit: now hase the flash scenes select"
finaly episode 4 is done:
*bocodamondo want to earn money so he cook 'fred" and the rest is the beginn of a new fricking adventure of bocodamondo.
-thanks to jaxxy egoraptor tomamoto & eddsworld to helping me on the voices in my submission.
you can see the flash is 9MB thats why i can't make subtittles
but im sure next flash i can do it :D
about the art, (deleted)
about the audio: bad quality WAS* bad
if you like my works here more:
so that it...
with big love -bocodamondo
Well, like many other people say on here, it sucks it blows blah blah blah. yea its not Egoraptor nor is it Oney level of art, but we do have to take in consideration that this person is actually trying. people who rate here usually dont know how frustrating it is to make an animation using flash, many just judge on the quality of tha graphics and how smooth the animation was. In my opinion yes it wasn't very good, animation-wise, but no one started a pro, bocadamondo needs to work on his english, and he should look around for animation techniques, learn some tips and im sure he will do just great later on.
note that im not putting stars on here because this is his early work, he is still developing his skill
It gets a 5. Only Because of Egoraptor....
1st off so now please read this befor your write 'OMG THAT IS CRAP" or "EGORAPTOR WHYYYYYYYYYYY"'
or " OMG WASTE OF LIFE I GONNE KILL MY SELF" ok? ^^
and thank you for reading this......
Well said, I couldn't have said better myself.
2nd, Egoraptor was always funny from day one. I don't think a even cracked a smile till I heard his voice on this "practice run" as you wish to think of it.....
Till you earn some comedic credibility and respect please don't put yourself on his same level. It tends to make people even more biased against what they've seen, as I am in this case. This isn't a hate review, I am trying to be objective and constructive. It was a little long for the plot, and the sound was very "choppy". You could tell where it suddenly came in and went out every time someone spoke. I do like the style of animation and your menu is very easy to navigate. Kudos for that. You had some Awesome authors working with you on this production. I would try to learn as much as I can about their success and methods, but try not to copy it. Use your own style and humor, but definitely tweek it for time and plotline. I look forward to seeing your next effort.
Interesting flash you have here. Lots of TV/game/internet references and an amusing plot. Keep trying and you should become pretty good :D.
Probably know this, but work on: voice volume, animation, etc...
IMMA FIREIN MAH LAZOR BLARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR RGH!!!
You should've put an ad in it.
You would have made a good 10 bucks.
I fancy the idea
Animation was pretty poor though, but the writing and humour was pretty good
I would say, this was pretty bad... BUT! You will get a lot better, your just 17, if you keep doing this you wi get a lot better
Everyone must start somewhere ;D
Because everything besides the animation is pretty good, Keep making animations! ^^
(Just one question, are you Russian? because of the accent ;) just wondering)
Learning your english from ps2 games, how convenient
i gotta say, that's how i learned to talk English well, lol xD
oh yea, how did you meet up with Egoraptor and the others? :D
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