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This is my first attempt at making a flash game, I realize that there are a few TINY coding slip ups, but its nothing that detracts from gameplay....Want to get peoples opinions before changing things...It is still very short, only 5 levels, but i will add more...

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not bad

but you need to inprove it alittle like have the plain stand out more

Imrove it

Not bad. But keep going. Try to improve it.
For example rise the frame rate for a smooth motion.

Intresting.

It's a nice attempt at your first flash.
I'd say add some more backgrounds or different items.
Maybe some type of point system to purchase upgrades.
And Music, next time.

Overral I like it!

Tractor responds:

Thanks, I will definitely be adding music and i like the idea of points and upgrades...
Gonna do some cleaning up...

Alright, but can be improved.

Well, for your first game, it's certainly nice and sound. I couldn't find any bugs, the artwork was good and it was pretty complete. Of course, it can certainly be improved. Here are a couple of tips I thought of.

Never, and I say NEVER, have the framerate of Flash set to 12fps, 24 is the minimum for games like this.

Try adding some background music or some sound effects, perhaps a crash when you, er, crash.

Finally, try adding an animation for when you press/release the Space Bar, it doesn't look very pretty the way the plane jerks in one direction or the other.

Still, it's a nice game, kept me interested for a bit. Keep it up!

Tractor responds:

Yeah I do agree that the plane does move about a bit erratically...Need to smooth the movements a bit...

Thanks for the feedback =)

Nice and simple

Fora first game this is great. Simple game play, nice graphics, although you could improve on the planes physics to make it more realistic. Have a look at incorporating some rotation with the_rotation function. This could make it very nice to play without the sudden jerking of the plane up and down.

Tractor responds:

Yeahp yeahp, i do agree 100% with you on this...

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