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Yey! My first submission!
This is a short movie that I kinda experimented with and yeah, this is the results.
I gladly appreciate feedback, constructive critisism please. ^^
Well, enjoy. And find the easteregg :P
Made in Flash CS4
I kinda like it.
The animation was okay.. I think Steve died to fast tho :(
Also I've found the easter egg!
I liked it. Only thing I'd change is the same thing people are always saying to change - I'd make it longer. It got me interested in these two characters, at least. You planning a series with this or anything? I bet it'd be cool.
I´m accually planning on a sequel, and I promise it will be longer!
Thank you for your rewiew and I am happy you liked my movie ^__^
Not bad at all! I like your style, and humor. The easter egg made me lol.
It's alright. The ending is what made it funny. Besides that it just seemed like an awkward moment to me. What exactly was the point of this vid anyway?
I really liked this. A little short for my taste. Would love to see more. I loved the replay button as well! lol! Dialogue could be worked on a little bit. But otherwise for a first time submission I thought it was excellent.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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