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This is a work I did in my 2d animation class. Still rough need to rework some things. There is no play button. So once it plays it will just keep looping.
it dont get the ears to bleed :Ð
Notbad for class
So this was more of a class thing now that i can see and understand, Hope it all worked out, The song in this was pretty good, and i liked it, and it seemed to fit well with the content, so as it was just a class thing, i thought you could have put some more effort in spicing it up, but i understand it being just a class thing, but anyways, The "CHARACTER" guy was kinda neat differant, you showed some ok effort there you shoould do more stuff like that, so for the mostpart this was a decent flash, color could be a more focus from the back end and front end, just something to think about for a future project or something, So while this was a good little flash there could be a few fixes here and there, i suggested some more "FOCUS" on color and even to spice it up with abit more stuff going on and more use with the neat character, something to work on for the next one or even some upgrade of this one, so anyways a good flash i thought just needs a few fixes here and there
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well this was notbad, could be fixed up and improved with some more use of color, and something that could spice up the flash abit more, also the charcter you had could be used more also.
A class project but notbad at all.
This was not the best, but it did seem like something that would be good enough to be good in a class. I hope you are doing well in your class and that you use this experience to become better in the future. I could not make out what that sign in the background. Even when I zoomed in on it, I was still not able to find that the resolution was good enough to view. I really appreciate you putting the Narwhals song in at the end. That guy in the cartoon kind of looks like some kind of lizard or something.
That you added the Narwhals song just to gain popularity. The flash isn't half bad, but adding random popular songs to gain popularity isn't, well, you know what I mean.
it was ok
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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