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just a freakin short trailer the real thing is gonna be smoother,and more action of course
they should find hank
just like that
maybe they will or will they....
I've seen better...
...but not much. I agree with the music comment made earlier. Find a way to stop it at the end of the trailer, and that alone will help a lot. Aside from that nit-picking, looking forward to the full length production.
of course youv seen better have you ever seen life in the portal
try making ur own characters , not steal em from the madness ultimate sheet xD
i didn't steal em meening im not "making it my own"
maybe credits shouldv bin longer
Not good at all
You've got a long, long, long way to go on this. First of all, SLOW DOWN THE TEXT. I didn't have time to read anything before it flashed off the screen. Secondly, I don't care if it was a "trailer", is looks like an unfinished project that was way, way too short. Lastly, make the music stop when the flash stops. Everything was over in 15 seconds except for the music.
You have an ok idea here, you just need to put a whole lot more work into it.
what a crittic :3 and this comming from the guy with only 00.23 experience of flash making.... its hard to make flashes you waffly rio echicha gorda berua (i am not mexican)
Alex the rouge.
It looks promising for a trailer, I hope the end result lives upto the promise. Not sure if it was intentional, but Alex may prefer being a 'Rogue' than a colour. I hope to see the the full production when it is ready for public veiwing.
A short film about a park bench
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