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i worked hard on this one to fight is a little bit longer i hadn't had enough time to complete it so the ending is wack hope you enjoy it
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i need an audio programmer XD
animating was better just work on spelling and i think ull have a pretty good flash
This needs move improvemed.
The next episode must be animated better next time.
As said below
Lack of plot and poor spelling.
FYI, having someone fight doesn't count as a plot, you need an actual story.
Don't use the excuse "I rushed through it", you have no reason to rush through it, if you rush an animation it's obvious, if you take your time, it's also obvious, just slow down for 5 minutes and think about what you're submitting before you actually submit...
this coming from a guy who has never ever used CS3,CS4 or anything that makes a fking flash game/movie......you would never understand
get a plot
you know get a plot none of that was good and noy even the animation
watch episode one "smart one"
There is definetly room for imrpovement. The quality was kind of poor and there was a lot of bad spelling. Keep improving though maybe the next one will be better.
this coming from another guy who never done a flash
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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