Score: 10
"Epicness Developed"
date: November 23, 2009
Alot of Your animation abillities have improved since Madness Day 2008.
Firstlly I liked Your own art of appearance of Madness Characters with there new facial features, and more musculen figures appearring more mean and hard. Jake L Turlper looked alot better appeared, more musculen aggressive with his facial features and gear all rearranged for the better. Stabby appears as Sci Fi solider positivly with his mask mostlly Both Characters simulate towards the mordern Madness Combat Fashion which blends in well with the theme of this Flash.
The Backgrounds are well designed with the blue skies outdoors an original approach of enviromental appearrance. The Surgeory and Laboretys were well laid out in which adds more decoration to colour in with the plot of this cartoon. Keep up the creativity with this new development towards flash.
The Plot makes alot more original sense with Jakes metamorphesis, The element Yrgonium, etc. Its impressive of how You took the storyline of the prequal of this flash to such an alternative turn, which makes it all the more interesting.
The animation of movements and action has improved alot since your last Madness Flash. The Shooting and Melee combat of this flash are alot more smooth and had a very good attempt with a two protaganist perspective. Also had some clever fighting styles of killing. A few things I have to crititize you about. When Jake was hanging on the ceiling and shot that agent, the feeling of impact and brutal force from the gun blast ceased to exist. That also needs to have the finishing touch of pain and power from the bullet when it hits the agent as said with more of the meaning on my last review. Also what I think You need to do for next madness flash is focus on the one protagenist perspective to master the full edge of madness animating. Also add a slight tilt on the madness character's body, when walking and etc. Back at the elevator scene when Jake defected the firing bullets with his sword, You didn't put at first in footage, before the shooting, the agents raising thair guns firing at Jake. All that was viewed after Jake sheilding against the bullets was a massacre of guards instead. Another thing to keep in mind.
The Car Chase Scene was awesome. The Vechiles were nicely drawed and designed, and there was well motioned action. What You should try with future car chase scenes is to watch the begaining of Madness Combat 9 and look into alot of detail with the camera movements, different drawn views of vechiles and charecters close ups in footage, and think in more creativity of what how to give future car chase scenes a more stronger visual impact with fast and furious action that would glue the viewers eyes on to the computer screen.
In Conclusion You have clearlly improved alot more in madness animating since last year. What You should do is give yourself a long timeframe to animate a perfect madness flash and master all there is to master to be a better Madness Animator. I give 10/10 for Your great, hard works on this cartoon
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November 24, 2009
Author's Response:
Wow, epic review :D
You definately gave me enough hints to improve on future submissions.
And I have to say that I agree with all of them, so they are truly helpful.
Thanks a lot ;D
