pretty good

it's a little fast though...

Keep Tryin'

I guessing its probably a first or something along those lines, but it really needs to be slowed down a bit and it was a bit short.

Slow it down a little

This is good for a first movie. Try to slow it down a little, as the dialogue goes by far too quickly to read. Also, instead of music, you may want to add sound effects to add more to the movie.