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The parody short movie (35 sec) about the beautiful girl under the rain. This is the third flash movie I ever made.
Sorry that it's the project's requirement to not put the sound in.
It does need a better story line, also a button to play would help.
I didnt like the way that she walked and the people came out at the left, i would prefer something that shown the road, backround, more detail really.
Keep working at it.
before i start, you should know that its much better than my third time, but still...
its not a good animation, choppy, I dont really like the idea, but i know it could have been much much better
even if you did have a reason, no sound = no extra points, so i give you 1 for effort, and 1 for a short chuckle at the end....
also, dongt loop, alot of ppl will hate you for looping.
So my final verdict is 2/10 1/5
and as a friendly tip, try this agaiin, take more time, more frames, upp the frame rate, add a repeat button and just all around updates on the movie and it just might be an alright video
nice try, try again
Oh come on
you can do better, and screw your reasoning for not doing sound, what "project"?put sound in it! And the animation itself is really just, choppy, angular, poor in general. I know you say this is your third but that's no excuse, take the time to get a better program, or find out how to get the best out of the program you have. work on real animation, the mouth at the end was horrible. you can keep the animation shapes and such, but add more real animation, practice practice, and look around on newgrounds for animation tutorials, also look on the net, everywhere. and a minor but still annoying note, work on your english, that definitely matters if there is no sound!
The return of Dr. Bees!
Goling about and preventing things.
He was working in a whip shop in Flushing, Queens...
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