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Sep 20, 2009 | 7:39 AM EDT

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The first episode :D
Sort of introducing the characters.

"Two Continue" by Onision



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

What indeed?

This is one of those submissions where there doesn't seem to be anything that good or bad about it. It was interesting to see a new series being made. You did do a pretty good job at introducing the characters. The main fault with this is the animation. Everything just seems too off model to really enjoy that much. I think most of the jokes weren't that well paced, especially how they seemed to be a bit too short and jumped too quickly.

I suggest you also put some sound effects that play during the episode. It was a bit funny how I saw that there were windows in the beginning of the episode. Okay, that was a lame joke. Your characters should probably have more depth to them, so put them in a situation that might express their personalities better. There did seem to be some heart in this, though.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

not bad

when is that your first flash then i say only : WOOW
when that not you first is i say: keep working ^^

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad

I would like to see you practice drawing and FBF animating, but it's halfway to becoming a decent flash sitcom.
it's time consuming, but it'll pay off!


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Looks promising

from all the crap that's been passing lately this one looks remotely promising, can't wait for the next part.


Rated 2 / 5 stars

err bad

i'm sorry for the rating but this needs better lipsync and animation.

PS: to the voice actors your voices sounded a bit emotionless.