Score: 1

"The credit goes to Egoraptor"

by: DarkStarfire

date: October 16, 2009

because, sorry, you didn't do anything.

Score: 1

"damn"

by: narcoze

date: September 28, 2009

this sucked.

Score: 6

"I liked it.....but the animation...hmmmm"

by: peachprince

date: September 19, 2009

I like that type of humor. I guess it comes from being cynical on a daily basis. The animation is doodiefied and could use some more personality.

Score: 3

"Needs a lot more"

by: Coop83

date: September 19, 2009

You've given us a demo on lip syncing here. It's not really animation, just by making the lips move - you're trying to cash in on Egoraptor's brilliant voice piece and have truly failed to do it justice.

The stars are given for the fact that you've actually drawn a pretty decent character, added a decent looking pre-loader and have actually synced up the voices pretty well to what little movement you put in the piece.

Try putting some more effort in - make the background more detailed - there's sounds of the sea, so why not put some moving sea in there - no sea is ever as calm as you've drawn it. Have the two backgrounds change and make the characters look at least slightly different - I don't just mean give them a new hair style either.

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Score: 2

"not better than the Sponge Bob White Trash flash"

by: AuronY2K

date: September 19, 2009

I agree with both reviewers below me. You have to put more effort into it. Some background music would be nice. Its just..."meh". You can do it better, you have the tools and the skills ;)
And remember, if you want people to enjoy your animations, you have to enjoy making them first. It looks like you didn't have a good time doing it. If you are submiting your work is because you want to show the world what you can do, and that is respectable.
Cheers, man!