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Submitted: 09/16/2009 | 01:04PM EST
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Genre: Drama
Current Score: 3.27 / 5.00
308 votes | 1,037 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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A young warrior has dreams of fire and upon seeing the old wise man for advice is given leather armor. Music: http://ccmixter.org/files /gurdonark/22597
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Average Score: 8.5 / 10
"Nice"
Good oratory. Great story
"Good story telling"
It's nice to see a submission that makes you think a little. Some of the art could use a little more detail but I still like the style. The narrative and voice work were entertaining.
"Wow"
well other then having no start button it was very good the story telling was very interesting
Thanks. Yeah, I'll have to add a start button so it doesn't loop. It's pretty easy, I just forget.
"Superb"
A wonderful story, and you tell it so well. Although it wasn't very short as you implied, I did enjoy it greatly Although I do wish there was some variation in some of the art. one can tell that the same image was used again and again, or with the pile of armor, they were all the same. other than that no complainants
