small war
Credits & Info
- Uploaded
- Sep 14, 2009 | 7:42 PM EDT
- File Info
- Movie
- 3.9 mb
Author Comments
made w pivot don't bitch. it also has an api flash add in it so tell me if there's buge
made w pivot don't bitch. it also has an api flash add in it so tell me if there's buge
Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars December 10, 2010
epic but..
why would a guy take all the wepons and stuff but get the fuck kicked out of him at the end by a unarmed guy i still like your animation and can you teach me how to get a preloader P.S. pls make a part 2
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 9, 2009
Pretty good...
I liked the animation, but your spelling... work on that, buddy, kk?
Everithing else, good!
kk ty and yeah thats me with out spell check
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars September 15, 2009
Needs some work
Let's start with the basics - You need to work on the spelling, as there are plenty of errors here. Weapons are semi-automatic (not simi) and others besides. You can download spell checkers for free, so have a look and give one of those a shot. Failing that, you can download a dictionary for Firefox and use that one, if you need to ;)
Subtitles tend to look better if they are within a bar at the bottom of the screen - yours tend to look a little out of focus, which is perhaps a problem from the video converter software.
The animation isn't that bad and I'd certainly like the look of seeing this taken further, because the ending looked a little abrupt. It can be longer and give us more of a cliffhanger. Perhaps more research, by watching things like Madness and XiaoXiao would help your productions further.
[Review Request Club]
thanks i rushed w the spelling and the words were made in paint. the movie was made w pivot.
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars September 15, 2009
meh
Not bad. Not bad at all. I liked alot of the action. Thats about it though. Plot was...I dunno. Oh and btw spell check.....
ik u and like 5 other people said that and the movie was made in 08 i got better w spelling. ty fo da review
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 14, 2009
Okay
I guess it's okay, for a pivot.
ok T.T