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made w pivot don't bitch. it also has an api flash add in it so tell me if there's buge
why would a guy take all the wepons and stuff but get the fuck kicked out of him at the end by a unarmed guy i still like your animation and can you teach me how to get a preloader P.S. pls make a part 2
I liked the animation, but your spelling... work on that, buddy, kk?
Everithing else, good!
kk ty and yeah thats me with out spell check
Needs some work
Let's start with the basics - You need to work on the spelling, as there are plenty of errors here. Weapons are semi-automatic (not simi) and others besides. You can download spell checkers for free, so have a look and give one of those a shot. Failing that, you can download a dictionary for Firefox and use that one, if you need to ;)
Subtitles tend to look better if they are within a bar at the bottom of the screen - yours tend to look a little out of focus, which is perhaps a problem from the video converter software.
The animation isn't that bad and I'd certainly like the look of seeing this taken further, because the ending looked a little abrupt. It can be longer and give us more of a cliffhanger. Perhaps more research, by watching things like Madness and XiaoXiao would help your productions further.
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thanks i rushed w the spelling and the words were made in paint. the movie was made w pivot.
Not bad. Not bad at all. I liked alot of the action. Thats about it though. Plot was...I dunno. Oh and btw spell check.....
ik u and like 5 other people said that and the movie was made in 08 i got better w spelling. ty fo da review
I guess it's okay, for a pivot.
Going back, one last time...
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