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Sep 13, 2009 | 4:31 PM EDT

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Just a short flash based on Watchmen. I know I did change somethings, and yes, it is short, but I think it is good. Special thanks to Jared Kowis and PJ Simmers. It shouldn't be that hard to follow if you have either read the Graphic Novel or seen the movie...Please if you haven't done either one, do not post a review saying you don't get it! Enjoy!

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ReturnedLammasuReturnedLammasu

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 13, 2009

Some very good work.

I'm really glad to see more people doing Watchmen flash.


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CoopCoop

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 13, 2009

Continuity errors

Not a bad take on the Watchmen Grapic Novel and movie, but there are continuity errors that could do with being addressed over the course of the movie - Rorschach never called Jacobi by his first name, only by Moloch (save for when he addressed him as all of his alternate names). Also, he called himself by his Walter Kovacs name when he said that he died that night, with Rorschach taking over from then. It's quite a big difference, with the way it plays out in the film.

I think that the drawing style is quite nice - more cartoon like than even the Graphic Novel, but it seems to work. Perhaps with the animation, you need to make it more like the characters are moving, particularly the dogs, which just seem like a layer that moves over the top of another.

Still, it's a good piece, but with the way that you've chosen these scenes from the film, perhaps you could have had the talk with the psychiatrist and the Rorschach blot tests for the two of them.

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PyroSpriteProduction responds:

Thanks for the criticism, but you are wrong about the Jacobi thing.He says
"good evening Jacobi,got your note,been wondering why you wanted to see me"