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Sep 13, 2009 | 8:49 AM EDT

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My first cartoon in pencil

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iHeartQuistisiHeartQuistis

Rated 2 / 5 stars September 13, 2009

Hmmm...

Well, the flash is not bad - but the humor here presented wasn't all that impressive. It really lacked in the audio department with quality at that. It needed some music, or even yet - some simple voicing acting of some kind.


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Jonesy177xJonesy177x

Rated 1 / 5 stars September 13, 2009

Hand?

is this done by hand? ^_^



MeganeoMeganeo

Rated 3 / 5 stars September 13, 2009

Not bad.

I find that the animation is good since it was made with pencil.
But I don't know what's so funny about this because you choosen "Comedy - Original".
There was a sound that I found it was just wrong. That BEEP you hear when the mouse sees the cheese.


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neos300neos300

Rated 3 / 5 stars September 13, 2009

Nice

But the lack of story kinda sucks. I realize that you have to pretty much draw every frame from scratch, but seriously, only make pencil animations if you can put a lot of story into it.

Also, newgrounds is not really a place to put your first stuff.