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Hope you enjoy this musicvideo, surely the song :D
Awesome! It rock'd! :D
i LOVE THIS xD
It's just so inovative.
Needs a little more
Not a bad piece, but I think that your animation falls short of doing justice to the song itself. Perhaps a few more animation techniques will help you with making this a more pleasing piece.
The arms of the 'funky gerbil' could use a little tweak here and there - consider what note they will be playing - high or low and position the hand accordingly. This could be done by changing the shape of the hand on the neck. Also, the striking of the bass notes needs to be addressed. Try changing the arm - while the shoulder will move down and up, the majority of movement is from the elbow, as the hand moves up and down. These relatively simple changes will make the flash look so much better.
Finally, the colours don't quite contrast, when the background changes, making the gerbil change colour as well - perhaps keep the gerbil in the colours as normal and then have the background change colour, to see if that looks better.
Overall not bad, but a few more additions to the piece will see you right :)
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Oh, thanks for the advice!
That movie was hilarious! i love it!
An asinine adventure through the world of high fantasy.
Super villainy at its worst ...
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