Score: 3
"Update when you get more familiar with Flash?"
date: February 12, 2006
Cool start. Nice job on the characters, colors, backgrounds. Nothing really happens though. Looks like a project, rather than a finished piece. Anyway, I'm sure you're going to rock at Flash when you get more familiar with it (you said you were just starting out). Something like this needs to be filled with imagery, a lot faster paced. Needs to get inside the factory, etc. Anyway, nice job, just some ideas, honest constructive crit. You are obviously a talented guy. Good luck.