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this is a joke about hunters
well this is me and my friend tim making these characters and doing voices for them.
Not So Good...
Your artwork is good, but the animation is bad. The voice acting is okay... it was a bit scratchy. You either need to do better voices or get more voice actors. The sound was good, but there really isn't much going on within the sound department. The story is actually a nice idea... two guys sitting on a couch talking about what's on TV. It has potential to say the least, but you really need to make big improvements before continuing onward.
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elitists humor doctors needs a cup of "shut up"
"perhaps you could do something with more intelligence?"
first of all, humor is the the victory of emotion over intelligence, two, this movie was parodying another form of stupid entertainement that is needless to name
this was a good display of 2nd degree humor, wich is, by the way, a form of intelligent humor....
Nope I'm wrong it was Hilarious!
Needs a little development
The artwork is pretty good. Work on the animation a little. It may actually be easier if you didnt include pictures and just drew the deer freehand. The voice over is good, but it is a little on the loud side.
Could have been much better if it wasn't so horribly drawn.... and next time i suggest not SCREAMING into your Mic while recording. thanks. good scheme though. would watch it again if better drawn.
A short film about a park bench
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