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Sep 11, 2009 | 3:25 PM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place September 12, 2009

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First episode of Life Shorts)

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staudtgcstaudtgc

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 12, 2009

Nice style

...but the "candy from a stranger" part is a little hard to pick up on. You wrote "thanks," so why not just write "I don't take candy from strangers" or something. Good joke, though; keep going.



thatKFCmanthatKFCman

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars September 12, 2009

Just one question.

Uhh.. why did the man stand there AFTER the bus left in the beginning? xD

Wouldn't he be trying to get on?


JohnLorique responds:

He was waiting for bus number 14, the bus left at the beginning was 29)


VorldkhalonVorldkhalon

Rated 5 / 5 stars September 12, 2009

Haha lol

Took me a few seconds to understand the irony


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playdoheNINJAplaydoheNINJA

Rated 3 / 5 stars September 12, 2009

rightyo

umm what the. k bit pointless but not to bad bit short, music went wit it and so did the quality


JohnLorique responds:

the story is - the child gives a candy to a man after that he wants the candy back but when the man is giving back the candy child says - NoNo i don't want it, i don't take candies from strangers.


Dr4g00nDr4g00n

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars September 12, 2009

nice artwork

and nice humour
i like the animation style xD its reminding me of manga, cause of the faces and gestures are looking very similar in this both styles.


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