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Sep 11, 2009 | 3:25 PM EDT
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First episode of Life Shorts)

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staudtgcstaudtgc

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice style

...but the "candy from a stranger" part is a little hard to pick up on. You wrote "thanks," so why not just write "I don't take candy from strangers" or something. Good joke, though; keep going.



thatKFCmanthatKFCman

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Just one question.

Uhh.. why did the man stand there AFTER the bus left in the beginning? xD

Wouldn't he be trying to get on?


JohnLorique responds:

He was waiting for bus number 14, the bus left at the beginning was 29)


VorldkhalonVorldkhalon

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Haha lol

Took me a few seconds to understand the irony


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playdoheNINJAplaydoheNINJA

Rated 3 / 5 stars

rightyo

umm what the. k bit pointless but not to bad bit short, music went wit it and so did the quality


JohnLorique responds:

the story is - the child gives a candy to a man after that he wants the candy back but when the man is giving back the candy child says - NoNo i don't want it, i don't take candies from strangers.


Dr4g00nDr4g00n

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

nice artwork

and nice humour
i like the animation style xD its reminding me of manga, cause of the faces and gestures are looking very similar in this both styles.


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