At last I'm done.
this is what I have been working on for the last 10+ months, and towards the end it just felt like work, but I doggedly kept on with it.
Wow, half the length and filesize of the previous edition. I'm glad I took UchidaToshi's advice.
I got my graphics tablet(woooooooot!) when I was like 3/4 done, so I decided to use it to draw certain fbf effects, training myself for the third that's going to follow this take.
this one is not perfect, but I think you'll agree that it's better than the first. I've done my best to address the shortcomings of the first.
Oh yeah, make sure you got Flash 8 before watching this.