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A short sketch made for the pirate competition and my first animation and audio submission. It took me about a week to make with a on and off work ethic.
Please comment and rate with any criticism you have.
I have a fair bit of fun making this, but I have plenty to learn.
Not bad for your first.
It wasn't a bad premise, made me smirk a bit. Good job on the voice acting, but you really need to work on the mouths of the speaking characters. The drawings are decent, better than most. Compared to other first submissions (excluding a few handfuls) this is front page material. Anyways, good job, I expect to see better things out of you.
Thanks for the positive feedback. I'll read some tutorials on animating mouths and work on the timing!
Loved it lol. Pirates rule! couldn't have done better myself. good job.
Ha ha, cheers!
I like it. Very nice looking for such a small file, and the voice acting is good. Make the next thing longer, and maybe with music, if possible.
Thanks, the next cartoon will be longer. But it will be a collection of shorts.
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