Basics were there, just make something longer!
I was impressed and amused by what you'd done, but for a higher score it'd have to be longer. Nice work :)
Author Comments
Yet another Bunbun short. If you like the animation check out Bunbun's site for more animation and comics. (there is a link at the end of the animation)
Thanx to Bart v. Oort who did the audio.
I'll try to respond to all _serious_ comments, your feedback is most welcome.
Illumatie responds:
2 reasons why it wasnt longer: 1- 17 frames a sec is a lot of work. 2- for a longer animation you need a story, I just had this pun, no reason to extend the animation any further in my opinion.
There are more and longer Bunbun animations at bunbun.eu.
Thanx for your feedback.
Nice
That was a funny short.
WOAH!!! Caught me off guard!
I was expecting a cuddly lovey-dovey movie, but the turnover of the mood was so sudden that I was in disbelief!
I suppose that was what you were trying to do, and you succeeded... I won't go on about the length because it's a "short" but it did hamper your score a bit.
fluid animation, great joke, nice art, and nice music/sound choices... overall it was a decent little distraction!
Illumatie responds:
I'm happy I caught you off guard, that was were I was going for (: 2 reasons why it wasnt longer: 1- 17 frames a sec is a lot of work. 2- for a longer animation you need a story, I just had this pun, no reason to extend the animation any further in my opinion.
Ohhh man
I thought to my self here we go another lame tweened flash, then all of a sudden the rabbit jumps out in all its frame by framed glory, looking the sex, and impales the puppies face! Then it ended... and i was sad.. MAKE IT LONGER!
Illumatie responds:
2 reasons why it wasnt longer: 1- 17 frames a sec is a lot of work. 2- for a longer animation you need a story, I just had this pun, no reason to extend the animation any further in my opinion. But it is always the main complaint of all my shorts (except maybe Animated Violence). in the future I plan to work with more people than just the sound designer like maybe a writer so I will have more of a story to tell. thanx for your feedback.
LOL!
HAHAHAHAHA! Awesome! 5/5 10/10
Illumatie responds:
Thanx dude. If you really liked it, google: Bunbun or check the link at the end of the animation to a lot more of my animations and comics.