its my first flash animation
its a random story of a stickman
i hope you enjoy it =]
if can tell me what i need to improve and how i would love to hear that!
good job
hey man, dont let these whiney peckerheads bother you. to be your first flash i think you did a very good job considering. ive seen alot worse people have submitted as their first flash. the animation was very clean and i look forward to seeing more from you man, good job. im gonna give u an A for effort
thats a lot man its really nice to hear that!
i'll try to do some really funny things on my animations and with better drawing and to pot some plot on it lol hehe
i did it really in shot period of time and totaly random to see what i can do with no expirence on the flash
i hope to hear from you again =]
NAAAARUTO!
Oh, man gay coming back if he is naruto, NARUTO IS THE END!!!!
every one with his opinion.....
but my next one will be better and naruto wont be there hehe
Oh well
it's okay i guess, but try speeding it up a bit and actually add a plot or make a lot of funny random shit
(codeword being funny)
i'll i just wanted to try some different things i didnt try to make any funny random things just was looking to see what i can do with no expirience on flash.. but i can do much better i loot at the comments and the next animation with worth to watch =]
So..
The fact that you start to animate makes my critic abit gentle.
It needs many aprovements.. you sayd its random, that says to me you make a hand full of random animations. But you did only 1 wierd story about a stickman that doesn't make any sense.
First of all, try to make a real story, or even a real random series. That helps alot.
The other fact is your drawing is really easy.. even i can draw it better for the fact i never tried it. ;P
The FPS is low and make it boring.
At least.. Why let you end it with a stupid naruto pic? write END or something like that if the movie ends-.-
Fact: Your first time okay.. but that doesn't say your story must be bad and the Ending. First try to set a better story
thx it helps a lot.. i'll try to make better animations i can draw also better it was only a quick and first try animation
No plot, truly random
It just doesn't go anywhere. Your animation style looks good for a novice, if you make your next movie with more direction it should be good. Sometimes the hardest part of this process is coming up with strong stories, keep at it and I'm sure you'll get better.
2/10
1/5
thx a lot! as i said its was just a random try on my next clip i'll make a better one with a plot and somthing more funny i hope you will watch it =]