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Sep 8, 2009 | 4:29 AM EDT

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enjoy this movie, this is better than episode 1, well, have fun, if you donĀ“t understand a part go back with the rewind button...



Rated 5 / 5 stars

I have a few simple things that would help improve

The begining movie: I could hear a faint zzzzzzzzzzz that was very distracting. Did you record the music with a microphone from your speakers? There's various different ways to do that without using a microphone, pending on where you got the music from.
Wizard guy:The echoed voice is very annoying. The simple solution would be to remove that.

When they talk: Their heads bob to the right. It looks silly, as if they are having seizures as they speak. If anything, they should bob up and down.

Portal: I know you seem like you're still learning, then again, everyone is. I disliked the shape of the vortex because you made it seem like a sphere. A sphere is rounded, pushing outwards. If you're trying to make a vortex, make it more like a cone: with the inside swirling into a small hole.

Thinks I liked:
The silly splat noises you made when something got kicked or punched. Like the cactus guy, or the bear dude getting splatted by the wizard person. I'd suggest more splats, splooshes, and other gags.

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diogoshx responds:

ok you helped much...


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


It is kind of sick and random...But, I laughed pretty much...Nice work...The animation could be better, but I think it is a part of the humor :)

diogoshx responds:

you can be sure of that


Rated 4 / 5 stars


good job!!

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