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Sep 5, 2009 | 5:28 PM EDT

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Sega and Nintendos first

Note: my note work on some Comps

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DennysLockDennysLock

Rated 1 / 5 stars September 5, 2009

Well....

It passed judgement, so you're off to -a- start. Try increasing your frame rate, and definitely work on a new preloader. Whatever script you're using made my browser freeze and that took points off from the start. There really wasn't any story to speak of, so maybe go back to the drawing board and work on a plot. The art wasn't horrible, but I'm sure if you put a bit more effort into it, you could do a lot better. Good luck with future submissions :)


Quinn-zip responds:

Thanks! I'll Take the advice!


RandomzeldafanRandomzeldafan

Rated 2 / 5 stars September 5, 2009

Good, and bad

It has good editing in it, but the concept is weird. Even though it's obvious it's about a war with Sega and Nintendo, I just don't get it. And I don't know what you mean by "1st". I can see though that you have some skills in flash making, you just need to make a better story and concept.