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rated 3.31 / 5 stars
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Uploaded
Sep 5, 2009 | 3:48 PM EDT

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Author Comments

ShadedBlackLines did the loading art!

These 4 little flashes were to test my new Intuos4 Tablet.
Please enjoy them, and please don't blam me :D.
I really want to be a part of this site, so I worked really hard.
New to Flash, so these are what I could do.
Any advice, tips or comments are greatly appreciated.
PS: I've heard "My flashes lack plot." before.
7/8 of Newgrounds lacks plot, but here is the plot for the animation:
The Ball Fails, The Heart Breaks, The Man Runs, And The Plant Grows and Dies.

Reviews


Ravaness66Ravaness66

Rated 5 / 5 stars

noice

some plot would have been cool but no need better then i can do lol :) see you on WOW



JakespeareStudiosJakespeareStudios

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Neat

I like the stream of consciousness feel to it. Might be interesting tying the four separate pieces together with one plot.


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IKanzAnimate responds:

Thanks


tofeptofep

Rated 5 / 5 stars

nice

altogether I think its good but I want more!!! =P


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IKanzAnimate responds:

Gunna be workin on another one soon


DogmeatFilmsDogmeatFilms

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

keep it up

youre' on to something here, just try to put a background picture into it and clean it up a bit and you have yourself a good flash. Nice music choice too.


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IKanzAnimate responds:

Thanks for the tips, and as for the music, i didnt have a song to fit ALL of them, so i resorted to a simple song :D


YoppYoppYoppYopp

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Okay but more

Needs more stuff. The stuff you had was okay but it needs more to qualify as a real flash movie.


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IKanzAnimate responds:

Going to work on a much longer flash, adding backrounds, sounds, and make it really nice. these were just to test out flash and a tablet