Score: 4

"Who is Josh McDaniels?"

by: Ericho

date: November 27, 2009

It doesn't help that I am very unfamiliar with this sports affair with Josh McDaniels. It is nice to finally be able to review something made by you, one of the most prolific reviewers on the website yourself. I guess it was funny to see the guy's mouth get bigger and bigger. I know what it's like, being one of the best reviewers, but making some stuff nobody likes. I still haven't figured out how to download the flash thing at the beginning and it's sad if you don't know how to either. The music got annoying after being so loud.

Score: 2

"Lolwut?"

by: Coop83

date: September 12, 2009

I've never really been a fan of NFL - not my style of sport, to be honest. I think that there needs to be some serious work on this flash, however:

Animation - there is little that can be detected. Perhaps adding some voices would be a better way to deal with this piece, as it looks like it could use a more human touch, even if you're slating this coach character. From the vocals, you could then try some 'animutation' lip-syncing, which would make it look loads better.

Finally, make the music into a menu tune and add a main menu and preloader, which will give you more or less instant results. The whole setup will have improved so much by then that this piece will barely be recognisable and you'll be able to get some good plaudits for it, trust me.

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Score: 3

"Eeeh."

by: Insanimation

date: September 11, 2009

Art/Animation: 3/10
There really wasn't any, whatsoever, except for the occasional change in the face..Which was kinda interesting, but nothing special. Also, the watermark sometimes distracted me from the subtitles.

Plot/Concept: 4/10
I know nothing about American Football, so it could have been excellent, or really bad...It seemed quite good, but nothing special. Maybe you just need to make something appeal to a wider audience, as this perhaps appeals to maybe 5% of the NG population.

Audio/Music: 3/10
Some voice acting would have spiced it up a bit. Also, the music didn't really fit the story..

Overall: 3/10
Nothing too special, really. Needs a lot of improvement.

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Score: 5

"Well..."

by: Haggard

date: September 10, 2009

If you aren't into american football (I should say "Handegg" as this sport is about carrying a ball that looks like an egg with you hand >_>) you can't hardly understand what's going on here.

I have no idea who those guys where, and I only know how the football team of Denver is called because of South Park.

The music was pretty nice (what, a cover of Firewater Burn? Cool!) and the facial expressions that guy made looked nice.
Problem is that he only had about 3 or 4 expressions that looped even when he wasn't talking.

The story went on a tad bit too fast, so I had to read a bit faster than usual. But I liked how he said "you can expect results around mid-season" and then we saw a bunch of empty seats.

The stats at the end of the flash went by way too fast. Some buttons where I could flip the pages and then a replay button would've been better here.

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Score: 7

"Heh, lol :D"

by: Supersteph54

date: September 10, 2009

Not too bad, you get most of the score from the Story and Audio.

There wan't really any animation over here, so maybe, just to add some sort of animation, you could make some transition from one scene to another, like a fade or something. As for the graphics, it was basically just pictures, but the looks he did on his face were pretty funny. The page at the end with the statistics would be better to have a replay button instead of a loop.

The story was very funny, and it's what really put my score up. As Fro said, it would be cooler if you animated it, you could make another flash as an animated version, or you could even make a menu screen where you can choose between the animated version and this version.

The music was fine and fit in pretty well with this, but to make it a little funnier, you could stop the music when it showed the empty seats and start a cricket noise, then continue the music when the statistics page comes up. Other than that, the audio was fine.

In all, it's really funny, and the only complaint I have here is that an animated version could look better, or maybe a choice between the two. It's the humour here that put my score up to 7.
7/10
4/5

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