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Sep 1, 2009 | 8:59 PM EDT

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this is the second part of the first Skeleton Movie (one of my first flashes)
ENjoy
if you don't know why he's dead then look at the first one
http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/510048

and can someone help me make an icon for this>? i don't know how

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AggzzaAggzza

Rated 5 / 5 stars September 1, 2009

hahahaha

best sprite ever


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dragonhanddragonhand

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 1, 2009

on its way to become good

the act dead part was good and also u added some speech thats good and u added the save the world part .
better then the first one i hope u can still go better than this good luck on your next one

PS:if u are learning how to do flash then after finishing the skeleton series i hope u can make stuff like that but in flash.


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kfc23456 responds:

yea for the next one im going to tell the whole story then after that i'm going to make a game


HaggardHaggard

Rated 3 / 5 stars September 10, 2009

Needs more work

This is an okay attempt at a sprite movie. I liked how you mixed serveral sprites together here and none of them where Mario, Luigi, Sonic or Tails, heh.
That Skeleton was from Golden Axe, right? And well, the soldiers and that guy with the long hairs are from Metal Slug, no doubt about that.

The spirtes look good here and you made good use of them. The killings look pretty realistic, those things can look very bad if they aren't timed correctly.
When the skeleton acted dead however it didn't look as if it was lying on the floor. Instead it was standing on it's feet, back bend backwards. So a little more work here is needed.

The biggest flaw where the speech bubbles. Sometimes they wheren't even big enough to take up all the text, so the text appeared beneath the bubble.
And in the beginning there still was the "Press" command visible behind the text. Those things can easily be avoided and if you don't notice them already while creating the flash you should watch it at least once after you finished and before you upload it to correct these very visible mistakes.

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CoopCoop

Rated 3 / 5 stars September 2, 2009

Hmm, a few changes and we're there

Not a bad piece overall - I can see that this particular entry would benefit from a subtitles bar, as jumping around the screen to click the speech bubbles to advance the text. I think that a button on the bar would suffice to advance the text in that respect.

The plot is workable, but could use a few tweaks, to make it less linear. Perhaps have the guy that killed the skeleton get back up after he died, or something, like a recurring villain, perhaps.

It's got some great potential, so keep working at it and hopefully the next one will be better :)

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kfc23456 responds:

...yhu ruined the secret for the next one
he's just injured,but he gets killed at the end of the next one

Secret ruiner >:o
lol just kidding, but i'm making a way better one


FroFro

Rated 3 / 5 stars September 8, 2009

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~ Animation/Graphics ~

For the most part the sprites were animated well. There was one spot where the old man was shooting and his feet didn't really touch the ground, which stuck out like a sore thumb and there was also a part where the man was dragging the skeleton and other guy around, which looked very odd. I wasn't sure if he was suppose to be physically dragging them, which would be very hard to represent with the sprites that you used or if he was using some sort of magic force. If he was doing the later then you should have used some sort of animation or graphic to represent this force.

~ Story/Content ~

I agree with Coop below me that you should have had a subtitle bar at the bottom of the screen instead of having it in the way of the animation itself. Keeping the button would be a good idea as it was nice to be able to read at our own pace and then go on with the movie.

I hadn't watched your other submission and I don't know if it's a prequel to this or not, but honestly this one was sort of random. Plot could be worked into something pretty good though and I could see this moving in the right direction in the next submission.

~ Audio ~

I think voices could have worked here, but the subtitle bar would have worked just as good in this case. Music and sound effects were perfectly fine as well.

~ Overall ~

Good sprite work except for a couple of parts and a workable plot.

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