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Here's a short animation sequence i did for yet another uni project. The aim was to show anticipation, follow through, exaggeration, and squash n' stretch. Took me a bit under 2 days to finish. I'm gradually getting quicker at this stuff...
Any comments or crits welcome!
That's actually pretty good. The animation and drawings show that you too time in it. The only thing is missing is some sort of sound. And maybe background music. I didn't mind watching this, but it would be nice to have something to listen to also.
Great for a short two day project and i think you achieved what you wanted! if sound was added it would be even better :D
This is an excellent short but could be improved by making it longer or into a cartoon. Excellent work.
You have great skills! This has potential as a full cartoon in my opinion :) The only reason I couldn't score it higher is because of the obvious lack of sound and also the length, but I like your style! :)
All the visual aspects are very good (char design, lightning, background, animation), but if it had sound (or at least background music) it would be awesome.
Consider using soundtracks in your future proyects =).
8/10 -> 4/5
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