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Aug 31, 2009 | 4:04 AM EDT

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I started making flash movies six years ago. I was 12 back then, and since then I just didn't have the patience or commitment to completely finish a flash movie. Finally, I managed to get a movie done to submit it to the internet for the whole world to see. This is my first published flash movie.

It began in march 2009, when me and my friend decided to have a sort of flash contest. We had two weeks to create a flash, submit it to Newgrounds and see who got a higher score. The contest was cancelled as my friend didn't have the time to make flash in the two weeks. This movie turned out to be much bigger than I expected, so I took my time and finished it in a period of six months.

I kind of regret how this movie didn't quite turn out how I originally envisioned. I had a deadline, so I had to cut some corners in the making of this movie. I wanted to make this movie longer, more thrilling and more cinematic than it is.

Yet, I finally did it. I published my first flash, and to me that's all that matters. I hope you enjoy it. :)

Edit 10.9.-09: FRONT PAGE! Friggen' awesome! It's like a dream come true. :D

A week after I first submitted this, I was disappointed for the fact that this movie was so overlooked. It got only 20 reviews. Within a day since Paranormal Creatures got a front page, the amount of reviews was doubled. Great!

To celebrate this, I just submitted an updated version of the movie. It contains only small improvements, no big changes: I reworked some rough looking animations and corrected the mistake where the scratches on the main character's jacket disappeared in some shots.

Thank you for everyone for your support and the constructive critisism. Because of your reviews I now know what I am good at and what I need to improve in my future work. I have a lot of awesome ideas for my next flash. Just stay tuned...

Reviews


shadowdog7shadowdog7

Rated 1 / 5 stars September 11, 2009

i agree with clownshoes21

I'm sorry to say this but the flash was very poor. I didn't like it at all due to the following reasons.
-Animation sucked
-Wasn't exciting at all
-the whole stick ending was stupid as hell
Dude i would like to see this movie again but have like alot of touch ups and a WAY better ending. good luck in the rest of your movie making. lol hit chupacabra with a stick? WTF come on


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Larty responds:

"Dude i would like to see this movie again but have like alot of touch ups and a WAY better ending."

Me too. There were a lot of cool things I had to cut from the final version of the movie. There was supposed to be an opening sequence and two additional sequences at the end that I had to cut. These scenes weren't completely necessary considering the scope of the movie, but they would have contributed to the story a lot.

It's still my first published flash, and there was really no way I could have done any more work than this. Regardless, I don't think your review was entirely fair...


SirSaguiSirSagui

Rated 2 / 5 stars September 11, 2009

smooth animation but....

...the drawings are too simple, need more better details.



daedrickdaedrick

Rated 5 / 5 stars September 11, 2009

Keep them coming, you can only improve!

I gave you 5/5 and 10/10 for you first flash ever because you deserve it and I strongly encourage you to continu to make flash and improve. Obviously it isnt flawless, and Im sure you know just as much as I know what are the things you need to improve on.
Thumbs up!



CrownusCrownus

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars September 11, 2009

cool

good use of sespens



deathsdoordeathsdoor

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 11, 2009

nice

i like that you favor the idea of th"hero" liveing to the end of the movie and winning thats a great thing , poeple still like to see the good guy win.