Heh,
Not bad for first try.
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EDIT 25/8/09 : Front page? Are you kidding me?! Thanks so much to the guys at newsgrounds for this, i've been reading all the reviews and every single one is helpful even the ones who didn't like it, fair play. I'll keep at it, I really want to improve, so more feedback is welcome and appreciated. I'm still so new at this and in absolute shock. Thanks a lot, guys.
Becca
// This is my first flash with a storyline. Still pretty new to it, but tried to improve my walk cycles and smoothness since the last submission.
It is basically about how the slightest difference in action can completely change yours or another's life, like the butterfly effect. But here, also, the person realises that they can do the very thing someone else has done to them, given the right circumstance. If that makes sense.
It's about 2:13 mins long, i made the music, it's still pretty rough but it's the most i've achieved in flash to date, i'd appreciate any feedback/advice you guys have.
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Outstanding
This flash has a lil' of everything i would want in a story. Morality, Ethical choices, Choice consequence and of course Chaos Theory.
It has been said that something as small as the flutter of a butterfly's wing can ultimately cause a typhoon halfway around the world. (One of the many variations I've heard/read, I'm privy to this one though).
Animation: 3/5
Storyline: 5/5
Music: 5/5
All in all: 5/5, 10/10.
Note* I think people could learn a lot from the symbolism of this story, the effects one's choices have on the mass majority of friends and loves ones, maybe even strangers.
Interesting flash, with slight bit of abstract
Pretty well done in terms of concept, and the style wise, it's outstanding. Pretty rare to really see such flash, though there is still room for improvement. Good one on your first try. :)
cool animation
I like the style of this animation. Nicely put together and flows very nicely. You have some really good drawings skills. great work of showing different perspectives.
Wow.
I had this on my favorites and didn't remember it. But now that was freaking amazing.