EDIT 25/8/09 : Front page? Are you kidding me?! Thanks so much to the guys at newsgrounds for this, i've been reading all the reviews and every single one is helpful even the ones who didn't like it, fair play. I'll keep at it, I really want to improve, so more feedback is welcome and appreciated. I'm still so new at this and in absolute shock. Thanks a lot, guys.
// This is my first flash with a storyline. Still pretty new to it, but tried to improve my walk cycles and smoothness since the last submission.
It is basically about how the slightest difference in action can completely change yours or another's life, like the butterfly effect. But here, also, the person realises that they can do the very thing someone else has done to them, given the right circumstance. If that makes sense.
It's about 2:13 mins long, i made the music, it's still pretty rough but it's the most i've achieved in flash to date, i'd appreciate any feedback/advice you guys have.