Score: 10

"nice"

by: jman1973

date: August 28, 2009

its a great aniamaion they keep getting better and better hope you keep up to great work

Score: 6

"You still need more work in it"

by: Sifter1337

date: August 28, 2009

The walking animation was just like running. Blood needs better detail.

The recoil was just rotating the gun, you could make the sticks lean.

When the sticks fall, they just freeze and fall down. And you need the muzzle flashes to have a better effect.

It was pretty good, keep practicing.

Score: 7

"Not bad....."

by: epic-death

date: August 23, 2009

Pretty good for a stick cartoon.

Score: 10

"Anarchy...."

by: RKV

date: August 23, 2009

Man I don't know what everyone else saw....
I liked it man.
Maheim, Killer Guns, crazy deaths....
Awesome.
Great job.
I love these stick cartoons. Yours was one of the best in my books.
Definite a favorite for me.
5/5 10**********

Score: 4

"unnatural"

by: bi0mech81

date: August 23, 2009

This suffers from the problem of "do something, then stop and wait while someone else does something" which so many stick fights suffer from.

it just feels very rigid and unnatural the way when one of the figures is performing an action all the others just stop and stand there until the action is completed.

Example:

two sticks run at each other.
stick 1 pulls a gun.
stick 2 freezes in place
stick 1 shoots stick 2
stick 1 freezes while stick 2 dies.

better method for example:

two sticks run at each other
stick 1 pull a gun
stick 2 reacts to the gun (slowing down or reversing his run, not just freezing in place, or maybe tries to jump back some)
stick 1 shoots stick 2
stick 1 moves on while stick 2 dies.