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FAUX Chapter III
Jan is unknowingly used as bait by Reuger to lure Lacorse to the police station. But things go wrong very quickly.
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please.....PLEASE do NOT listen to zillis (guy below) he does not know what the FUCK he is talking about. it's pretty clear to me that the piece where she "conks out" and has that conversation is necessary for later developments and the whole uneven thing.....what!? have you ever even looked at a human being zillis, have you ever even drawn a picture.......not everything has to be perfectly even.
also the pacing was alright in my opinion.
Seeing your other movies theres a definite improvement with this one, it's alot better animation and timeing overall.And I actauly was compeled to wacth all the way through,.
although im giving it a ten this a relative ten compared to your other work's and by no means , means perfect. I do think this can be improved by having more animation's and hiring voice actor's.
I love art I love comics and this is awesome 2nd one got me on my feet at the end I was like oh snaps what are they goin to do and this tells it all :D im lovin it IM LOVIN IT ALL!!! GREAT MUSIC TOO :)
Very well done!
You've got over the main problem of parts I and II, everything happened so slow. Now, this is fast-paced, and it really fits for the actual sequence. I smell plot armoring for the main characters but whatever. It was fun.
keep it up :D
i like how you have used animation but, at the same time, you still used the "comic" style, i was waiting this to come out :)
as some people said already, the ballons were kinda fast
bye, hope you keep it up :D
p.s.: i like your drawing style
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