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FAUX Chapter III
Jan is unknowingly used as bait by Reuger to lure Lacorse to the police station. But things go wrong very quickly.
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I like it but
I think you could change the mouths of the people. I think they are a little too big and wide, I do like the shape of the characters. keep up the good work!!!!
short but not bad
it would be better as a web comic form then a flash.
but hey its good effort, and nice job
I really have enjoyed the series so far. Some of the frames I thought that their facial expressions didnt match the situation that they were in or what a person should look like if they are surprised or flirting or fearful for their life. Your drawing style is quarky and likeable I only wish your flash skills would allow you to do full movement instead of frames with speech bubbles.
Thought I should give you some encouragement for the speech bubbles. I think you are a little too far in the series to get voice actors and there would be an upset if you suddenly gave them voices. I suggest keeping the bubbles it adds mystique, but some times you give an excessive amount of time for us to read when it is not necessary and not enough time to read when it is... so general rule of thumb read what is in the bubble (time yourself and allow a couple seconds extra for us idiots to read) or hell just add a "NEXT BUTTON"
love where the series is going keep it up I'm looking forward to more.
the first part of action was awesome
i watched this because of the trailer......but i personally didn't like it. but the subject was really cool
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